Showing posts with label news phrases. Show all posts
Showing posts with label news phrases. Show all posts

June 15, 2011

When simplicity becomes rarity

Why subject the subject to subjectivity?

If the above question makes you feel sick, do blame me. I would welcome if anyone pins blame on me for being sick with that sentence. First, let me admit that I do not know anything about universally accepted linguistic principles. Now, Who would want to listen or read lines like subjecting the subject to subjectivity? It is an imaginary sentence that has no specific origin or usage. The reason for writing it is actually making an attempt at chasing this new trend in news language to its extreme. With the current trend, the above line may one day find place in some TV channel. We do listen or read unique lines everyday through our newspapers or television news channels. I, as many others, follow what I get to listen or read through available resources. Mostly related to current affairs, I do come across this new trend in the language everyday. It is part of my daily professional requirement. In the process, I inevitably raise questions to myself- Why take away simple words from language and fill the space with 'complex invention of unnecessary phrases'? Why hate simplicity of language if that is the magic of it?

History books tell us that human race evolves over time, so does the language of human race. Hence, changes or modifications are seen in all walks of life including the language we speak or write in. Every language has its grammar. So you stick to the grammar as much as you can. Sometimes you take liberty from specified rules and make it more convenient for yourself. This modification is also known as adaptation. And it is a natural process. It can also qualify as linguistic innovation.

But many people, mostly from news business, do not seem to believe in natural evolution of language and its traits. Therefore, forced evolution takes effect. Even if provided with the best of conditions, a fruit takes its time to ripe. It can ripe days before its natural time, if forced by a chemical conditioning. But we know how a fruit would taste if the natural growth is advanced by applying artificial means.

Television journalism makes fruit ripe even before existence of that fruit is established. I will again make the same request. Watch TV news and observe the language used. Why do we replace simple words with more complex, newly invented phrases? Why do we pretend to be masters of language when we are not? Why the simplicity of language condemned and complexity preferred? Is there any benefit out of it? As I see it, there is none.

At least in India, we see inflation of already crowded news vocabulary. For instance, Why write "big blow" when blow is what you mean? Why say "massive loss" when loss is what you report? Why say "big tragedy" or huge tragedy" when tragedy alone suffices? Look around, you will observe, these words have influenced language as used in daily lives. Television channels take liberty to be flexible with grammar. This liberty has done more damage to language. Unwarranted modifications have replaced rules.

There is no dearth of words in english language, if the only objective is to multiply the significance of news by putting a word here and there. Won't  the usage of the phrase "Racism beyond shame" categorise racism as a lesser crime? Or an acceptable act? Then how will one define "racism under shame"? Racism itself is an unacceptable act, why set boundary and re-define it? But 'racism beyond shame' becomes acceptable. Simplicity is treated like contempt of complexity. Usage of simple verb, adjective qualifies as poor linguistic calibre.

As I said above, we are not in the business of amending the existing grammar. Though Innovation in language can be accepted without much argument. But how can an unwarranted invention be acceptable? People who have brought news vocabulary at this juncture see nothing wrong with the degradation of language. Not because they don't care, but because they do not know that the degradation has already begun. In fact,  they are playing an active role in it. Not that anybody is bothered, but by the time remedy is thought about, wounds spread to every part of the body.

When you read 'a subject is subjected to subjectivity', you inevitably take note of it. It makes one think whether there is any dying need to add adjectives, edit verbs, play with nouns, when simple verbs can be trusted with the job. Every language has its own grammar. Not to decorate the language, but to maintain the uniformity.

Linguistic discipline is the backbone of this profession. Simplicity is the first lesson. If it is not respected, we will end up with new dictionary every year that neither has the right word nor the right meaning. Editorial immunity, guaranteed under the constitution, can not become a reason for hitting new low everyday. The current trend neither decorates the language we use, nor does it help in maintaining uniformity of any kind.
Since linguistic complexity has become daily business, simplicity of language has become an asset. If you possess simplicity of lanuage, cherish it.

December 27, 2010

Information and Interpretation

Indian media has seen an unprecedented growth in the last one decade. Every form of media is available twenty four hours a day. This growth story saw many changes in the functioning of news organisations. This change is largely visible in the newsroom of any television channel. Some commercially successful examples of this growth story have changed the way news is portrayed or conveyed to the viewer/reader.

While giving shape to the available information, television news has shaped itself. It has entered a never seen world of instantly created phrases summing up the development in a few words. With the changing times and limited space to put out news, newsrooms have devised different phrases to convey news. The growing competitiveness in the news business has provided technological advancement to the way news is delivered which, in turn, led to the creation of these phrases. It is debatable if these phrases convey the development in its true nature or not.

Watch any news channel for 15 minutes, you will understand what i am trying to say.

The lower part of the screen shows a scroll labelled as "Breaking News". Through this scroll, you get to know the most recent and important development at that particular hour. It tells you what the respective channel thinks is the most important news of that hour.

I can cite a few examples in this context-

Development- X says something which appears anti-Y,  X charges Y with something.
News- X attacks Y or X slams Y over....

Development- Y replies to the charges levelled by X.
News- Y hits back at X.

Development- X questioned by Y over something
News- X quizzed by Y over something

More precisely,

Development- PM writes a letter to Agriculture Minister Sharad Pawar asking him to take appropriate measure to control onion prices.
News- PM pulls up Pawar.
("Pulls up")

Development- Launch of GSLV-P5 fails.
News- Disaster at Sriharikota.
("Disaster")

Development- Digvijay Singh blames RSS for Ajmer blast, RSS replies saying Digvijay is playing politics of appeasement.
News- War over saffron terror.
("war")

Development- Opposition parties stall parliament demanding JPC in 2G case.
News- War between opposition and government over JPC in 2G case.
("war")

Development- Girl, an employee of Dell computers, found dead in her apartment in Bangalore.
News- Dell employee murdered.
("Dell employee"- Was the murderer looking for dell employee?)

There is no end to such examples.
If one thinks that this is "Indianisation" of television news, then it is not correct. Look at a few examples used in the western media. One can call it "journalism slang". Invention of phrases like "Safe heaven", "good taliban/bad taliban" is an appropriate example of this trend. Though these phrases (safe heavens, good taliban/bad taliban) are created by US administration, western media failed to come up with better definitions to convey the same meaning.

Use of such phrases by Indian media is widespread. Nowadays, TV news channels resort to such phrases for almost every piece of information. There is no particular reason behind the emergence of these phrases in day to day news. Many senior journalists provide two reasons behind this trend. The inability of journalists of current generation to have good choice of words and trivialization of editorial understanding within journalists .

According to the old school of journalism, it was always important to report a development with every detail a journalist can gather. First rule of writing news says that news should be written/shown in a way that common reader/viewer can understand. Interpretation of a particular news story was always left to the reader/viewer.

New age media thinks otherwise. It believes that you need to decode information for your reader/viewer. Therefore, you take a position and convey the news accordingly. The theory of delivering available information only has been abolished. A new practice of delivering information, with an opinion attached, has been introduced. Right from a story of a policemen demanding bribe for registering an FIR to central government introducing new bill in the parliament, every story is told with an editorial sachet attached to it. Even before getting hands on every piece of information associated with the development, story is colored as positive or negative. Even before you know what the story is about, scapegoats are identified, right or wrong is decided.

This is the reason why we do not see any news channel providing us details from a neutral point of view, as was the case till a few years back. Every development will be bracketed as right or wrong, correct or incorrect, irrespective of the necessity of being judgmental about the development.

I asked a senior editor in my organisation about the possible reason behind attaching this editorial sachet to every story. He informed me that our viewer wants us to tell him/her the meaning of the development we report. "We are expected to tell our viewer the reason behind the development. "We are supposed to decode the information for our viewer". I wanted to ask him why does he feel that our viewer will not be able to decode the information on his own. There was no reply. I personally think the habit of packaging editorial sachet with every news item has led to the usage of these unwanted phrases.

New York times columnist David Brooks has argued, in his recent article, that round the clock availability of internet is creating information-oriented people. What we need is a knowledge-oriented generation.

New age journalists come under information-oriented generation, who are not clear whether to write X slams Y or X attacks Y. Instead of taking responsibility of correcting such errors, editors prefer to stay back and cry over current state of news media. There can be several reasons for this. It may be attributed to lack of creativity. Some would also say, it is lack of understanding of the importance of choice of words. It is this bankruptcy which will hurt journalism more than a journalist's association with a lobbyist.

I raise this terminology issue with my seniors everyday. Reply encourages me even more- ""  "ठीक है यार, ज्ञान मत दे"....

(Growing India has growing media. Words like "Ridiculous" can be heard during news shows now).